Hello. I'm back again!! Do you know Adora Svitak? She is a teenager who had lecture in TED. She talked about "What adults can learn from children?" It was pretty interesting. I agree with her. I agree "Adults should learn to students."
My first reason is that children have more posibilities. As you know, adults are all grown up. Adults can't develop more. BUT children have many chances to develop. Moreover children requries perfection. I think it is a good attitude to acheive their dreams.
And my second reason is "Adults only teach students". For example, adults don't know about children. Adults always says "You should achieve your dream.", "Don't do this, Don't do that". "Study. Don't play."...... I hate this. They even don't know about us! Second, adults can learn more valuable things from kids such as morality. To adults, children can be a great teacher.
In conclusion, my opinion is that "Adults should learn to students." My first reason was children have more posibilities, and my second reason was "Adults only teach students". Thank you for reading my passage.
You wrote, "Adults can't develop more." Actually, you mean that adults can't develop as much as children.
ReplyDeleteYour short essay is well organized and the writing and content are clear. I wish you had used more examples to explain your thoughts.
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