I saw Matt Cutts' 30-days challenges. I felt that if I make a plan and try to follow it for 30 days, it would be better to fix or improve. I listed my habits that I wanted to add and subtract. I would like to introduce two things. First, I want to change my sitting ways. Second, I want to eat dinner fully, not only eat I want.
First, I would like to fix my sitting position. How is your sitting position like? Is it bended? Or is it straight? My sitting position is bended. I heard that if I keep sitting like this, I might get scoliosis. I was very surprised and worried when I first heard this news, so I decided to fix my way. First step is to sit up straight everytime I remember. Trying to sit straight right away is difficult. Second, I shouldn't lean my head on hands. If we do that, not only our sitting ways are affected, but also affect our face line. And finally, maybe I can sit up straight everyday without thinking. This is my first plan. Sit Up Straight!!
Second, I would like to eat dinner fully. I always waste my food. I feel I'm making too many polutions. So the first step to fix this habit is eat things that I want to. First step should be easy. I can easily eat things that I want to. The second step is eat vegetables. You know that I hate vegetables? But I should fix this habit. So I will try to eat vegetables slowly. It will feel yucky at the first, but it will be okay at the last.
This is my two things that I really want to change. If you have habits that you want to change, Try the 30-day challenges. I hope you succeed the challenges. Bye and cheer me to succeed!
FIX:
ReplyDeleteline 1: I've seen -> I saw (simple past)
line 1,2: fix or improve in 30 days -> follow it for 30 days
line 2: do -> fix or improve
line 2: take out "So"
line 2: want -> wanted
line 2: take out the comma after "add"
line 4: ways -> position
line 4: eat I want -> eating what I want
line 5: change all (ways-> position)
line 6: ways are -> position is
line 6: If -> if (lower case)
line 6: sit -> sitting
line 6: take out "way" after "this"
line 7: have -> get
line 7: hear -> heard
line 7: news. So -> news, so
line 8: take out "if" after "everytime -> every time"
line 9: insert "my" in front of "head" and "hands"
line 9: take out "like"
line 10: ways are ... line -> position but also our face line is affected.
line 10,11: And finally, maybe I can -> Finally, I may be able to
line 13: change third sentence -> I feel like polluting too much.
line 15: take out "So" and capitalize "The"
line 15: eat -> to eat (both "eat"s)
line 16: You know that -> Do you know
line 16: take out "But"
line 16: habit. So -> habit, so
line 17: take out "the" before "first" and "last"
line 18: This is my -> These are the
line 19: Try -> try (lower case)
line 19: put "in" after "succeed"
Fair writing, but you should be aware of little mistakes.
Your 30 day challenges are minor things in life, but they are actually very important. They both have to do with health and health is the most important thing. I hope you keep your 30 day challenge!
hi jamie! your blog is very interesting...
ReplyDeleteps. you are so good at writing essays and stuff!!><